Emma’s poetry rewrite

by newerawriters

Screen

Peering through the window focus

trees focus screen like memory

approach and see

one scene, another

together residue of the leaves

light squinting through the squares

frame comes into focus

on the tree a painting rustling

the breeze, your hair

the window, your eyes

are closed

in a room without a window

a view but within your mind

memories create

imagination creates

memories

inside this box

of sleep of dreams of daydreams of

what we remember.

On

Rotating

he was reminded

of the again

and again

he watched and

waited

wondering if

when

how

and the infinitesimal

why.

Repetition

he thought

was the answer to re

living

to fixing and re

doing

but he wasn’t

doing living fixing

any

one or thing

he was repeating himself

while others

move.

2

those that present define one another

ration an aspect as distinct, eternity

ration as distinct eternity: a system

measuring passage

I’m interval between two: youth

son, an effort limited before once

in contemporaneous not prehistoric

the sign: experience of, an, the, it

est. life, formal

force son spare hope, take “I’m”

define it?

etc.: proper, ever indefinite

characteristic of

me, relative

me, rhythm

me, duration

it’s poetic

being temporarily present

gain delay into occasion

lock moment: speed to fix 15 minutes

understand one travels quickly with progress

again and again, age at life.

3

The: of event as to (any) future continuous events succeed one another as a distinct eternity to come from measuring or limited between two particulars. end of a prescribed particular (formal term) imprisonment take a definite point break. extend rapidity of duration.

rest.

passages donate pertaining speed, stoke late attack. unisons limit early quit. achieve good, understand correct, observe quick quickly, alternate one’s own, designate one’s experience (me) (one).

rest.

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